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samtopuzes

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draft one-please help

« on: November 05, 2009, 09:33:32 pm »

I feel like I need to focus my essay more but need help determining how to do so. Please rate my essay/give feedback! It is my very first draft.


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jean253

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Re: draft one-please help

« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2009, 06:20:34 pm »

I will try to help if you can tell me how to access your essay. Then if you could take a look at mine that would be great.


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